Audience Feedback 2

I conducted another audience feedback session to ensure my product is a quality production. This is the last audience feedback i am taking before my final draft.

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First Draft Audience Feedback

Subject 12 First Draft from Emily Apps on Vimeo.


I showed the first draft of the trailer to my class to get their feedback and advice, this will help me improve my trailer and ensure that the final production will be of high quality. Below if a video of them watching and then commenting on my trailer.

Subject 12 First Draft Audience Feedback from Emily Apps on Vimeo.

Magazine Cover first draft

This is the first version of my magazine cover. I included a photo of my main character as this is a convention on screams magazine covers. I have also kept the dimensions on a scream magazine in my cover.

To ensure that this is up to standards i printed it to see any problems not visible on a computer screen and asked people to comment on it. Below are some of the comments i received:

• Blood spatter on character pictures below
• Black undershirt showing
• Yellow price circle cuts off before edge
• Outline of clown and "31"and "a rob zombie film" visible
• Authentic features.
• Too much empty space
• Character's body does not reach the end of the page.
• Which is the main story?
• White glow around Character doesn't fit with genre of film and magazine.
• Blood header and footer are a different colour to the masthead.