After taking into consideration the comments i received on my first draft i changed the magazine cover accordingly:
- I removed the blood spatter on character pictures below
- Removed the visible black undershirt
- Removed the glow around my character
- Improved the outlines and bleeding edges of pictures
- Added a background so it seems less empty
- Made the subject 12 section bigger, heightened the contrast and made the 31 section smaller and reduced the contrast and brightness so it is more obvious which is the main story
- Lengthened the body as it didn't reach the end of the page
- Made the header and footer the same colour as the masthead
- Reduced contrast of the "31" clown
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