Magazine Cover first draft

This is the first version of my magazine cover. I included a photo of my main character as this is a convention on screams magazine covers. I have also kept the dimensions on a scream magazine in my cover.

To ensure that this is up to standards i printed it to see any problems not visible on a computer screen and asked people to comment on it. Below are some of the comments i received:

• Blood spatter on character pictures below
• Black undershirt showing
• Yellow price circle cuts off before edge
• Outline of clown and "31"and "a rob zombie film" visible
• Authentic features.
• Too much empty space
• Character's body does not reach the end of the page.
• Which is the main story?
• White glow around Character doesn't fit with genre of film and magazine.
• Blood header and footer are a different colour to the masthead.